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Nawara by Xahari Nawara by Xahari
My new OC *v* Nawara. Here she is in the library, looking at the bookshelves, trying to decide which book to pick next.

Name: Nawara
Age: 19
Height: 139cm

Don't let this picture deceive you, she's a hot headed person with a big mouth -v-
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Critique by oPLUGiN Jan 8, 2013, 2:41:58 PM
I really like the first impression I get from her. The eyes are so captivating and drawing with such detail, as are her lips and her jacket collar. The detail in her hair as well is also rather impressive. However it's her realistic expression that really makes me enjoy thhis piece. Also just how innocent she looks.

However I see room for improvement too. I feel that the top of her head where the curve is could be lower. Her hair on the top of the head does not look poofy so much as her head on top looks bigger than it should be. While her lower region where her jacket is rather void of detail compared to the resst of it. Maybe adding some texture there would help? Otherwise it's wonderful disregarding those minor details.
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carolin36v Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She's very cute!!
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lerolla Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
I love her so much!
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Xahari Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so glad you do Q v Q <3
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lerolla Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
:hug:
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Nefeltari Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love this picture!! ^_^ Especially the eyes!
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Xahari Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much > v < im glad you think so!
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marihikari Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
cuute :)
I like her expression
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Xahari Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Theekoo <3
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marihikari Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
no problem :)
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Clampigirl Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Adorable! :love
Wait, she's nineteen? :o
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